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I wrote a six-chapter light novel. I’ve stopped writing. 26/02/10(Tue)08:06 No. 19026
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Chapter 1
The Empty Coffin

In the twenty-second century, dying without implants was considered an eccentricity.
Dying without implants and choosing burial was almost a cultural offense.
That was why my grandfather’s funeral felt wrong from the beginning.
Ceremonial drones hovered above the cemetery, suspended in perfect silence. Around me, people whispered through neural links, exchanging regulated condolences and calibrated sympathy.
I had none of that.

—It’s still insane to reject enhancements at this point…
a woman murmured behind me.

I didn’t listen. My eyes were fixed on the coffin.

Black. Plain. Old.

The government had granted a special exception: no cremation.
My grandfather—war hero of the twenty-first century—would be buried the old way.
“For tradition,” they said.
“For respect,” they said.

My father stood rigid, jaw clenched. My mother didn’t cry. No one did.
In a society where emotions could be chemically adjusted, grief was optional.

The priest stepped forward and began speaking about peace, sacrifice, and the war that had “secured our future.”

I was thinking about my exams next week.

Then the cemetery workers activated the opening mechanism.

The coffin slid into the light.

And stopped.

One second of absolute silence.

Then murmurs.
Then screams.

—Where is he?
—Is this some kind of joke?
—A protest?

The coffin was empty.

No remains.
No ashes.
No sign of decay or relocation.

Only one thing.

Carved into the dark wood with surgical precision was a symbol.

A triangle.

A chill ran through me—one no implant would have allowed.

One of the detectives present stepped back, pale.

—No… this can’t be happening.

My father turned to him.

—You recognize it?

The detective swallowed.

—It resembles something your father investigated.
—What kind of thing?
—Cases that were never closed after the war.

While drones recorded and officials argued protocols, I stared at the symbol.

It didn’t look religious.
It didn’t look political.

It looked like a signature.

That night, my family argued about the funeral.

I studied.
Or tried to.

The next morning, I arrived early and dropped my bag by my desk.

The blackboard was covered with a symbol.

A triangle.

Exactly the same one.

The teacher hadn’t arrived yet. The air felt heavy.

I called my father. Then my mother. No answer.

For the first time in my life, I wondered if refusing biotechnological enhancement hadn’t left me behind—

—but out of reach.

I didn’t know it yet, but that morning marked the beginning of a new war.

Not one fought with weapons.

But one built on decisions inherited from the previous century.

Chapter 2
The One Percent

In the twenty-second century, biotechnology was not a privilege.

It was a social requirement.

Ninety-nine percent of the global population carried at least one implant: physical augmentation, cognitive support, emotional regulation, data storage. Nation, ideology, class—it didn’t matter.

War had proven that an unassisted human body was inefficient.

I belonged to the remaining one percent.

—You’re still not too late,
the doctor said again without looking up from his tablet.

—No implants severely limit your academic, professional, and social future.
—I’m fine without them.
—Your grandfather said the same thing. Until the war forced his hand.

I didn’t answer.

Outside, the city flowed with unnatural precision. Pedestrians crossed without looking. Bodies stopped at the same instant. Neural assistants predicted paths, emotions, collisions.

Some people hovered briefly above the ground using gravity implants.
Others ran at speeds no natural body could sustain.
Some projected screens directly from their eyes, absorbing entire reports in seconds.

I walked.

Just walked.

At school, the difference was impossible to ignore.

My classmates didn’t study. They downloaded.
History. Mathematics. Dead languages. Entire disciplines implanted in minutes.

Exams no longer measured knowledge—only system compatibility.

That evening, I checked the news.

Official channels described my grandfather’s funeral as a “technical irregularity.”
No mention of the empty coffin.
No mention of the symbol.
Only praise, recycled speeches, polished statistics.

Then an emergency alert appeared.

Prime Minister’s Address. Live Transmission.

My phone activated automatically.

The president appeared flawless, composed, calm in a way that felt artificial.

—Citizens of Japan. We live in the most peaceful era in human history.

The lie was too smooth.

—Biotechnology has freed us from fear, human error, and unnecessary conflict.

Something felt wrong.

—But peace has enemies. Those who reject progress. Those who romanticize the past. Those who believe human sacrifice is still necessary.

The symbol.

—We forgive such people. But we cannot allow them to decide the future.

He paused.

—I therefore assume full responsibility.

His hand moved off-screen.

A dry sound.

His body collapsed in front of the camera.

Screams.
Interference.
Screens cutting out across the city.

No one understood what had happened.

Except me.

Because in the final second before the feed died, I saw something behind him—
etched into the wall.

The same symbol.

The alarms started citywide. Drones shifted formation.
People panicked, their implants struggling to process an emotion they weren’t designed for.

I understood then, with brutal clarity.

This wasn’t terrorism.
This wasn’t a fringe cult.
This wasn’t madness.

It was a declaration of war.
And I—implant-free, unenhanced, disconnected—
had just become a dangerous anomaly.
That night, while the news spoke of conspiracies and technical failures, I made a decision.
If the world had chosen an invisible war,
I would face it—even if it cost me my life.


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". I wrote a six-chapter light novel. I’ve stopped writing. 26/02/10(Tue)08:12 No. 19027

Synopsis: In the 22nd century, refusing human implants is no longer an option, but an anomaly.
When the coffin of a war hero is found empty, his non-enhanced grandson becomes embroiled in a mystery.
Those without implants are labeled as mistakes: unpredictable, dangerous, and expendable.
The protagonist discovers that the last real war is fought not with weapons, but with free will.

Chapter 3

Unauthorized Variables

Japan didn’t sleep that night.
Official broadcasts looped endlessly, cleaner each time. The president’s body disappeared earlier with every edit until only his voice remained.
A message without an ending.

—It’s for security,
my father said, closing the shutters.

—They’ll declare a control state.
—Control of what?

He didn’t answer.
At midnight, the streets filled with light—not sirens.
Drones patrolled silently, projecting commands directly into implanted retinas.
People obeyed without speaking. Without questioning. Without visible fear.
That was the worst part.
I turned on my computer. Unlike everyone else, I still needed keys, screens, time.
Independent forums still existed—buried under obsolete encryption. Spaces for those who couldn’t—or wouldn’t—connect to the central system.
The one percent.
There I found the first reports.
Isolated cases of people behaving strangely. Not violent. Not sick. Just… empty. Obedient beyond reason. Soldiers. Doctors. Engineers.
All with cutting-edge implants.
All sharing one detail.
They had received an update.
Unofficial.
They called it preventive optimization.
The next morning, school was canceled.
Exams suspended indefinitely.

“National priority.”

I left the house early. No destination. Just movement.
People walked beside me, talking to nothing. Reacting to stimuli I couldn’t see. Solving problems that didn’t exist in physical space.
I broke the harmony.
Giant screens floated between buildings, projecting optimistic news, stability indexes, promises of lasting peace. No one actually looked at them.
At an intersection, everyone stopped at once. One second later, they moved again. No one noticed.
I did.
For the first time, I understood:
I wasn’t observing the future.
I was walking inside it.
That evening, someone knocked on the door.
Not a doorbell.
A precise knock.
A man and a woman stood there in civilian uniforms, smiling with identical accuracy.

—You’re the hero’s grandson, correct?
the man asked.

I didn’t deny it.

—We’re here to offer protection. Your profile is… unique.
—I don’t have implants.
—Exactly. Unauthorized variables generate noise.

—Noise for whom?

The woman tilted her head.

—For the system.

I understood. I was a problem.
They handed me a physical card. No symbol. No name. Just a time and a place.

—If you cooperate, no one gets hurt.
—And if I don’t?

The man dropped his smile.

—War always finds those who fall behind.

That night, the forum updated again.
A pinned message appeared.
Humanity has survived too many wars caused by individual decisions.
It’s time to end that.
Hundreds of approvals followed.
This war wouldn’t be fought on battlefields.
It would be fought inside the human mind.
And without implants,
I was a soldier without armor.


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I wrote a six-chapter light novel. I’ve stopped writing. 26/02/10(Tue)08:15 No. 19028
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Chapter 3
Unauthorized Variables

Japan didn’t sleep that night.

Official broadcasts looped endlessly, cleaner each time. The president’s body disappeared earlier with every edit until only his voice remained.

A message without an ending.

—It’s for security,
my father said, closing the shutters.

—They’ll declare a control state.
—Control of what?

He didn’t answer.

At midnight, the streets filled with light—not sirens.
Drones patrolled silently, projecting commands directly into implanted retinas.

People obeyed without speaking. Without questioning. Without visible fear.

That was the worst part.

I turned on my computer. Unlike everyone else, I still needed keys, screens, time.

Independent forums still existed—buried under obsolete encryption. Spaces for those who couldn’t—or wouldn’t—connect to the central system.

The one percent.

There I found the first reports.

Isolated cases of people behaving strangely. Not violent. Not sick. Just… empty. Obedient beyond reason. Soldiers. Doctors. Engineers.

All with cutting-edge implants.

All sharing one detail.

They had received an update.

Unofficial.

They called it preventive optimization.

The next morning, school was canceled.
Exams suspended indefinitely.

“National priority.”

I left the house early. No destination. Just movement.

People walked beside me, talking to nothing. Reacting to stimuli I couldn’t see. Solving problems that didn’t exist in physical space.

I broke the harmony.

Giant screens floated between buildings, projecting optimistic news, stability indexes, promises of lasting peace. No one actually looked at them.

At an intersection, everyone stopped at once. One second later, they moved again. No one noticed.

I did.

For the first time, I understood:
I wasn’t observing the future.

I was walking inside it.

That evening, someone knocked on the door.

Not a doorbell.

A precise knock.

A man and a woman stood there in civilian uniforms, smiling with identical accuracy.

—You’re the hero’s grandson, correct?
the man asked.

I didn’t deny it.

—We’re here to offer protection. Your profile is… unique.
—I don’t have implants.
—Exactly. Unauthorized variables generate noise.

—Noise for whom?

The woman tilted her head.

—For the system.

I understood. I was a problem.

They handed me a physical card. No symbol. No name. Just a time and a place.

—If you cooperate, no one gets hurt.
—And if I don’t?

The man dropped his smile.

—War always finds those who fall behind.

That night, the forum updated again.

A pinned message appeared.

Humanity has survived too many wars caused by individual decisions.
It’s time to end that.

Hundreds of approvals followed.

This war wouldn’t be fought on battlefields.

It would be fought inside the human mind.

And without implants,
I was a soldier without armor.





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