I hope it's ok to post this here, I couldn't find another suitable website for my story my class inspired prose allowed. This is the succinct hot version of my story, names changed of course.

When he pierced me pulling gently on my sun bleached blond ponytail, I immediately knew that I’d changed, my blood it’s testimony, no longer a girl but a woman now. The pain I felt was incredible but short lived replaced by his fullness plunging deeply inside my depths forcing my cavity to form to him. Maybe I had been a woman for awhile clinging to my childhood fearing the loss of my simple innocent life being replaced by a difficult adult life. He changed me, I wanted it now feeling my excitement grow with his animal lust for me. I instinctual pushed back against him greedily wanting his entire length inside my wringing cavity craving him to complete his journey to feel his warm testicles press against me. His strong thrusts short but quick satisfyingly deep gently nudging my cervix open to readily accept his seed. His comforting weight over me comforted me pressing heavily against my trapped body on the picnic table as I felt his warm hips finally press against my bottom. His testicles repeatedly pressed against my sensitive clitoris teasing my mind and body to serve him as I gasped feeling my orgasm explode when he kept coming inside me.

His name was Cody, attractive, smart, confident, older, and respected by everyone. Cody was confidently unrestrained obviously open with his desires with the capacity to obtain it. He was excitingly dangerous making me uncomfortably wet each time he’d smile at me, looking at me as if I was naked. Willy, my insecure best friend since second grade, my constant companion, the one I’d always loved and cherished, hated Cody considering him a bully. The day it happened, the day I became a woman, Willy and I, exhausted from skating in the heat of the day were sitting on the cool grass at the skate park watching skaters when Cody joined us sitting next to me when I smiled at him with my invitation. Willy’s tension was obvious, my old pact to marry Willy when we were old enough threatened, Cody had smiled at me when he sat down causing me to squirm. Cody’s intoxicating perspiration from his hard masculine body overwhelmed my senses, I felt uncomfortably wet wondering if it was noticed. Willy was outmatched leaving soon after our small talk of skating technique, a challenging look between them confounding me. I felt uneasy, my safety gone with Willy’s disappearance.

My inexperienced young body in heat, I didn’t trust my thoughts with Cody. I stood up planning to leave but Cody caught my hand, stunned by the electric contact as Cody stopped me. Our eyes met, his intentions clear, I teasingly smiled at him instinctively running from him. I felt exhilarated sensing his close presence behind me deep into the privacy of the woods off the trail skipping around trees tempting him to catch me giggling with his playful chase. I unexpectedly came to a neglected picnic area unused by new changes made in the trails fearful of my capture. Cody caught me when I hesitated, indecisive with which direction to go to prolong his chase, I was afraid of what might happen unable to resist Cody’s charm. His hardness strained against me in his tight embrace, my hips sought his, submitting to his desire for me as we kissed. My heart raced matching our rapid breaths feeling his quick heart beating on my breast. His hands gently stripped me while we kissed, my attempts to resist Cody disappeared with my shorts and t shirt no longer protecting me. He devoured me with his lust filled eyes, turning me away from him I held my breath, afraid of what he might do, my wetness for him revealing my feelings when he pushed me down on the table. I was his the moment he satisfyingly entered me, my natural purpose fulfilled, my innocence broken, my body a devoted slave to his.

Many months had past, Willy quickly became scarce only seeing him at brief moments at school after he’d realized I’d relinquished my childhood for adulthood, our childhood marriage pact broken in our brief conflict. My perspective had changed, seeing the glorious benefits of intricate adulthood challenges thriving in the arms of Cody’s embrace. Cody filled my life, our lustful bodies rapturously singing privately, Cody’s exceptional athletic body mastering mine. My new fashionable attire reflected my attitude, a compliment to Cody, his preferences influencing my sexy choices. I individually rose through the ranks to the peak of popularity, a testimony to our relationship matching his.

Willy initially despondent and morose eventually prospered breaking his ties of childhood to find his path in adulthood through sports. His successes built along with his new muscular body, his confidence grew concurrently. Willy’s determination demanded attention rising through the ranks of popularity commanding his prominence for his successes. No longer insecure, emitting a palpable power, Willy’s stoic close proximity to me invoked my repressed childhood bond to him. His outlook more confidently optimistic, what I’d always wanted from him, he was thriving with my beautiful girlfriends. Their gleefully reported exploits revealed his prowess, earning their respect. My regret complete, reminded that it’s better to have loved and lost then never at all, I was pleased Willy was prospering.

Months had past, my heart leapt with each of Willy’s watchful kind smiles. My insecure shy smile in return betrayed me, his gentle nature forgiving. Cody disliked Willy, considering him a bully, hating that I’d respond in return with a friendly greeting in passing. I didn’t stop, I’d be exceptionally rewarded afterwards for my disloyalty in Cody’s bed. Cody was my constant companion, my best friend, he’s excitingly dangerous causing my wetness with his smile, but Willy had stolen my heart long ago. Cody and I were sitting in the park on the cool grass watching the skaters after our private competition exhausting both of us when Willy joined us sitting next to me with my shy smile inviting him. Cody was obviously nervous, Willy’s friendly smile disarming as we talked about skating techniques, my tears of joy and sorrow clouding my vision as I glimpsed Willy’s brief pained face, their challenging look between them confusing me. As Cody left his earlier understanding words haunted me, ‘it’s time - if you love someone let them go’…

I cried on Willy’s shoulder, my blond mane hiding my face, both of us tearfully admitting our mistakes, he’d taken me for granted, lust had distracted me. Willy picked me up, carried me like I was weightless to his house, his bedroom was no longer messy, his superman bedspread replaced with a luxurious white comforter, he gently placed me on his bed, my childhood picture still smiling from his nightstand like his from mine. The day it happened, the day I became Willy’s soulmate he again proposed our marriage, I accepted as we passionately kissed. Our clothing messed up his floor, my impatient wetness craving him inside me, my hard straining nipples revealed my desire for him. Willy raised my legs over my head then pierced me fulfilling my life’s dream. My bond to him satisfied, my devotion to him, mind and body, complete, he thrust slowly into me, his penis demanded my body’s full attention, my tight vagina actively struggling churning around him to accept his surprising girth, my cervix challenged with his length succumbed to him completing his journey. I greedily clung to Willy through my strong and swift orgasm, my body spasms prolonged attempting to prevent his slow withdrawal. Our blue eyes stared into each other’s confirmed his love for me, my love for him greater still. I couldn’t take my eyes off of his while I felt his penis stop it’s slow retreat to return again, my emptiness without him deep satisfied.

I greedily wanted Willy inside me for eternity, my intense orgasm exploded with slick wetness around his penis forced to expel outside my body to his bed, my first elusive penetration orgasm I’d believed a myth, my excited body trembled folded underneath him as I grasped Willy tightly in my arms as I cried out his name. My mind filled with fireworks receding momentarily my brain overwhelmed with glorious constant sensations throughout my body as he continued his slow long repeated thrusts until I couldn’t endure more, through my moans and excited kisses I pleaded repeatedly desperate for him to climax inside me. His strong masculine body contentedly crushed me as he ejaculated his wonderful seed deeply in me as my subsiding climax renewed with intense internal spasms feeling our consummation complete as I passed out. Willy was holding me tightly to him when I woke up, his face radiant with worry and satisfaction. My first thought after our grateful gentle kiss was we had at least five more long years before legally fulfilling our promise of matrimony, it seemed an eternity.