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As far as their physical intimacy, I don't think it needs to progress any "faster." Some complications or explorations might be fun, such as a close-call with Bill almost discovering their secret, or learning about something new that Sara likes (sexually, or not). Ultimately, it is their relationship and circumstances that really make the story special.
I don't think most readers want you to "rush to the finish". I think we just wish you'd post more often!