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I came from a thread on librechan to read the rest of the story, as the ASSTR page did not have the whole thing there, but I have to say, Damocles, you are an amazing author. I know I'm just parroting what others have said, but I do like the way you handle your characters. They may not be completely fleshed out, but they sure are realistic and the slow burn on the "sex" is just perfect. I would agree with others, however that it does seem to be a bit repetitive, at least in the most recent submissions, but, you seem to be able to tie things together, so I trust that you have a plan with that.
Anyway, I wanted to say that this is an amazing story, probably ranking among the top five erotic stories that I've read. Everything feels 5 times more amazing because I can really put myself in place of the male main character and my imagination is so vivid about these settings and events. I really want to go visit the cabin out in the boonies (I imagine it's in the mountains, but I don't remember where exactly where it was). I have a 1080p visual of what Sara looks like. Everything is just so real and genuine, but I will say that the main character is one lucky son of a bitch. I probably would have been caught by this point.
I know it might take a while, but I'm bookmarking this page and checking every day. I'm excited for the next installment.